Short story: Neuro-hacking Terrorism
Let me know if this is too spicy for the Jr Ganymede.
Just a short story I wrote.
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They met the way everyone met now—no fumbling like cavemen with messy biology, no awkward small talk like primitive ancestors groping for connection. Just a mutual scan, a synchronized pulse, and four to five minutes of immaculate ecstasy administered straight to the brain. Faces calm, indifferent, unburdened by the emotional messiness their primitive ancestors once endured. No words, no skin, no awkwardness. Faster, easier – perfectly optimized. Biology alone could never deliver such precise flawless optimized sexual pleasure.
They were among 6,000 passengers aboard the Crescent Mistress, a luxury cruise ship threading the long arc between the Eta Carinae nebula and Earth’s reconstructed orbit. Forty more days until port. Forty more days until civilization. Every pleasure could and would be indulged. Neuro-interfaces enhanced every aspect from the most intimate to the most mundane. Even conversation had been outsourced to personal AI companions—soft-voiced avatars that managed moods, curated expressions, filtered speech.
The woman had sat next to a new man when her interface stopped a bit early, a bit abruptly. Absently, she noted tapping around the room. In the deepening silence the desperation of the tapping only increased. She attempted to start a calming routine, but there was no reaction at all. Absolutely unresponsive.
It had been terrorists. An EMP surgically precise – strong enough to fry every neuro-interface, yet subtle enough to leave the ships reinforced computers unharmed.
Silence deepened, punctuated with desperate tapping at unresponsive interfaces and an unspoken horror filling the room. Every button dead. Neuro-tech fried. AI assistants offline. No emotion modulation, no messaging, no AI to optimize you to your best self. Forty days trapped with each other, raw. Confusion.
They had spent the majority of their lives getting meaning and connection from screens and online connections, from neuro-interfaces with built-in AI. People continued blinking at blank screens, hoping. Tapping dead ports. Calling out for their assistants and hearing only their own voices echo back. No pleasure. No warm surge in the chest. No blissful cascade across the spine. Just silence, and breath. And other people. The silence felt overwhelming and oppressive.
On the bridge, tension crackled. The captain snapped at the engineer: ‘Summarize—bullet points, now!’ The engineer stammered, ‘Long-range comms offline. Radio impossible until we drop out of hyperlight.’
‘Solutions?’
‘None. Even if we had spare equipment, no one knows how to use it without AI.’ Could they last this long?
Tension set in. Two would-be lovers sat side-by-side at the bar, staring forward. Without synchronized pleasure feeds, they didn’t know where to look. Or what to say. One cleared their throat. The other flinched at the sound.
Another couple attempted a kiss. He recoiled violently, nausea rising instantly, leaving both trembling and humiliated. She wiped her mouth for ten minutes, unable to stop shaking.
Bodies sculpted to perfection, oiled and toned, calibrated for every pleasure—yet no one could bear to touch. No one knew how to approach. They were starving in the midst of a feast, drowning in wine and dying of thirst.
A woman wandered the corridor whispering, “Ami? Ami?”—the name of her AI companion. When no answer came, she crumpled against the wall, clutching her head, weeping. A man in the garden pressed his wrist over and over, begging for his sleep routine. “I haven’t slept without it since I was thirteen,” he muttered. “What if I never sleep again?” No one could last that long without sleep. A teenage boy tried to flirt with a girl at the pool. Without real-time coaching from his assistant, he panicked and fled mid-sentence. She burst into tears—no endorphin drip to stabilize rejection. Conversations became minefields. Ami had always interpreted silences, translated tones, filtered cruelty. Now each pause was terrifyingly ambiguous.
Some turned to the ship’s help desk. “What do we do now?” they asked. “Just… talk?” The crew, equally helpless, handed out crayons, paper, and a guide on “Basic Communication Strategies.” One man laughed so hard he choked, tears mingling with laughter. The lights stayed soft. The food stayed warm. The music still played. But no one danced. Without the right chemicals and feedback, the rhythm didn’t make sense.
They laughed bitterly at the guidebook’s suggestion: ‘Touch your partner gently.’ It sounded easy yet none of them felt comfortable doing it. A life lived on screens had ill prepared them for this savage condition.
In quiet corners, some tried. A group of five gathered to share feelings, unfiltered. One woman screamed at another for interrupting. No one knew how to apologize. That night, two lovers sat side by side on a silk-draped chaise in the Aphrodite Lounge, eyes averted, hands locked tightly in their own laps. They tried to touch. His fingers grazed her wrist—and recoiled. Her skin was warm, moist. It terrified him. No filter, no safety. Raw presence.
By the second day, desperate panic had set in. People wandered the decks, gorgeous, gleaming, and desperate—Adonises and Aphrodites, engineered for perfection, now reduced to awkward smiles and aborted conversation. They yearned, and craved what was all around them, and there was nothing they could do about it. A woman wept in the hydro-garden, clutching her legs to her chest. “I want someone to hold me,” she sobbed to no one, yet she would flinch or scream at anyone walking by.
“Passengers moved down hallways in elaborate arcs, gracefully sidestepping each other’s shadows, a silent choreography of mutual avoidance.
On day four, the spa offered “Guided Gaze Sessions”: five minutes of looking into a stranger’s eyes, supervised by a therapist. Half the participants fled. One broke into dry sobs, eyes clenched shut. One man suggested they have sex like their primitive ancestors, like cavemen, with actual physical touch. But that grossed every one out, including many of the men.
The Aphrodite Lounge still offered some videos: old grainy 32K video of early physical intimacy, retro stuff. A few tuned in, watched with wide, hungry eyes, confused. No one could bring themselves to imitate it. One asked, “This is what we have to do? Like Cavemen? With all those bodily fluids? “
By Day 6, crew structure quietly disintegrated. Officers isolated themselves, murmuring instructions to absent assistants. The captain paced corridors aimlessly, repeating fragments of command scripts, ‘Summarize. Analyze. Propose…’
Someone began to scream on Deck 8. A low, ragged scream that didn’t stop. Not from any physical pain.
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The man and woman met again, by coincidence, in the observation dome. No pulses, no scripts. Just the stars gradually shifting and silence. He spoke first. “I think I remember your eyes.” She laughed bitterly. “I don’t remember anything. Just the afterglow.” They leaned against the rail in the silence. He shifted slightly and accidentally brushed her shoulder, raw, imperfect, unplanned. She flinched but didn’t move away.
Not artificial, nothing calibrated. No one knowing what would happen next.
seriouslypleasedropit
July 16, 2025
Wonderful
G.
July 16, 2025
So good